Halima, this is a well structured presentation. However you give only very brief definitions, and have not referred to the brief closely enough. You needed to give the purpose of each product, and a specific example. At times there is a sense that you have relied too much on cut and paste, rather than using your own words. Your summary comparison could be more detailed too.
Halima, this is a well structured presentation. However you give only very brief definitions, and have not referred to the brief closely enough. You needed to give the purpose of each product, and a specific example. At times there is a sense that you have relied too much on cut and paste, rather than using your own words. Your summary comparison could be more detailed too.
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